Shooting Rats at the Bibb County Dump

Shooting Rats at the Bibb County Dump

by David Bottoms
Loaded on beer and whiskey, we ride
to the dump in carloads
to turn our headlights across the wasted field,
freeze the startled eyes of rats against mounds of rubbish.
Shot in the head, they jump only once, lie still
like dead beer cans.
Shot in the gut or rump, they writhe and try to burrow
into garbage, hide in old truck tires,
rusty oil drums, cardboard boxes scattered across the mounds,
or else drag themselves on forelegs across our beams of light
toward the darkness at the edge of the dump.
It's the light they believe kills.
We drink and load again, let them crawl
for all they're worth into the darkness we're headed for.

TPCASTT Analysis

T-Title: The title "Shooting Rats at the Bibb Country Dump" predicts that the author enjoys shooting rats at the Bibb Country Dump. Also, it predicts that people in this poem are misothery. Misothery is a Greek word which means "animal hater."

P-Paraphrase: This poem tells us that people were drunk and they drove to the dump in carloads to shoot the rats for joy. The author mostly talks about killing rats and rats believe that it is the light that kills them.

C-Connotation:
This poem involves a lot of imagery because the author visually well described the dark atmosphere of deep night and driving with beer and whiskey. Dump in carloads is a very powerful image in this poem because the author tells us some waste like "rusty oil drums, cardboard boxes scattered across the mounds and old truck tires" which are very powerful images in visual and smell of dumps. And rat's startled eyes are also a powerful image in the middle of dark night and he tries to emphasize the dark atmosphere by describing the dark dump in carload.

Rhythm of this poem is very dark. People were drunk, driving to the dump in carloads in the deep night, and enjoying killing rats which are very dark and evil by shooting.

The metaphor of this poem is the indirect comparison of rat and human. In this poem, humans lose their nobility and become like filthy rats by shooting and drinking alcohols in the deep night.

Simile of this poem is "lie still like dead beer cans." Because he compared rats and beer cans using like or as. This simile shows that the people are drunk and lost the control of being noble.

Denotation of this poem is light because in this poem, light reveals the rat in the darkness. Connotation of this poem is light too because it is a symbolic meaning of disguised hypocrisy of "heaven and goodness." Because the light seems like heaven but in this poem the light is death and great fear for rats.

Symbols in this poem are light, darkness, and rats and humans and dump of carloads. Light is the symbolic meaning of disguised hypocrisy of "heaven and goodness." Light is death and great fear for rats, not pure and clean as human's perspective. The light shows that there aren't any species with nobility, but full of filth. The symbolic meaning of darkness is the peace or shelter because rats need to survive by hiding into darkness which contradicts to the light. It is very strange because the light in this poem is death and darkness represents the refugee of rats. The symbolic meanings of humans are war and violence because humans are the group who kill the rats violently. Rats represent the innocent civilian who gets suffered by the war. And dump of carloads represent destruction of war. Also there is irony in this poem because rats believe that it is the light that kills them but it is the bullet that kills them.

A-Attitude: Attitude of this poem is very dark and evil because the story goes on with dark atmosphere and people shoot at rats which is very diabolical. I think this poem deals with the war too, because the author lived in a period of World War II, Korean War, and Vietnamese War. The author is criticizing the human nature of "destroy."

S-Shift: The shift of this poem is "It's the light they believe kills." Because it makes us hesitate reading and think what this sentence really mean. And this shift is important because it shows how the rats (innocent civilians) are incapable in front of war.

T-title: At the first time when I read this poem, I thought this poem was about Misothery, but this poem had different significant meaning that is totally different with my prediction. This poem was about criticism of human nature of "destroy." Human creates and then we tend to naturally destroy or get rid of our creation.

T-Theme: The theme is that by the nature of human, we will continuously attack and kill each other like drunken people in this poem. And innocent civilians like rats will die and civilization will become like dumps in carload.

Grass by Carl Sandburg

Grass
by Carl Sandburg
PILE the bodies high at Austerlitz and Waterloo.
Shovel them under and let me work—
I am the grass; I cover all.
And pile them high at Gettysburg
And pile them high at Ypres and Verdun.
Shovel them under and let me work.
Two years, ten years, and the passengers ask the conductor:
What place is this?
Where are we now?
I am the grass.
Let me work.
http://www.poetryfoundation.org/archive/poem.html?id=174301

TPCASTT Analysis:

T-Title: The title "Grass" predicts that author is incapable like the grass, just attached to the ground, doing nothing.

P-Paraphrase: In this poem, the author tells us that wars happened in Austerlitz, Waterloo, Gettysburg, Ypres, and Verdun. So, dead bodies began to pile up, grass fertilized the dead bodies and the wars are forgotten by people.

C-Connotation:

This poem involves lots of imagery because the author wrote about PILING the dead bodies, shoveling them under the ground and covering all by grass which is a very powerful image in seeing. Also smell of soil and dead bodies is very strong too.

Alliterations of this poem are "And pile them high at," "I am the grass," "Shovel them under and let me work." They are very powerful sentences having meaningful messages.

Personification of this poem is grass because the author personified the grass by saying "let me do work, I cover all." In this poem the grass keep asking the dead bodies to work.

Allusion: This poem is an allusion poem which basically talks about the history. The poem tells us about how time covers all and how the dead people are forgotten over time. This poem mentions a lot about destructed places of war like Austerlitz, Waterloo, and Gettysburg. Now they have been rebuilt and covered with grass.

The rhythm presents in this poem because when the poem powerfully goes on, the poem keeps hesitating at the message "I am the grass; I cover all; Let me work."

The metaphor of this poem is "Grass." "Grass" represents a metaphor for forgotten or disguise of history. The author tells how history like wars are sooner or later forgotten and he points out that history should not be forgotten, but cited like a poem.

Connotation for this poem is "I am the grass; I cover all" which means that history will be forgotten because grass will work and cover all.

Grass symbolizes time. It tells how time covers all, how the dead are forgotten over time.
And places like Gettysburg, Ypres, and Verdun symbolizes the forgotten history and destruction.

A-Attitude: Attitude of this poem is very dark and sad because the poem deals with the forgotten history and human's repeating violence like war. And I also can see author's anger because when he says "What places is this? Where are we now? I am the grass. Let me work." These sentence shows author's anger toward the repeated violence and foolishness of human.

S-Shifts: The shifts are "I am the grass; I cover all; Let me work" because when we read this poem these statements make us hesitate reading and think what these sentence really mean. And these shifts affect the poem greatly because they show the feeling of the author like anger, dark, and melancholy.

T-title: At the first time when I read this poem, I thought this poem is about incapability of the author, but actually, it was criticizing people who forgot the past and repeat the same violent things like war. The word "Grass tells us how time covers all, how the dead are forgotten over time." The real meaning of the Grass is "time."

T-theme: Theme of this poem is "those who cannot remember the history are condemned to repeat the same things like the World War I, World War II, etc.

A Bird Came Down

A Bird Came Down
Poem lyrics of A Bird Came Down by Emily Dickinson.
A bird came down the walk: He did not know I saw; He bit an angle-worm in halves And ate the fellow, raw.
And then he drank a dew From a convenient grass, And then hopped sidewise to the wall To let a beetle pass.
He glanced with rapid eyes That hurried all abroad,-- They looked like frightened beads, I thought; He stirred his velvet head
Like one in danger; cautious, I offered him a crumb, And he unrolled his feathers And rowed him softer home
Than oars divide the ocean, Too silver for a seam, Or butterflies, off banks of noon, Leap, splashless, as they swim.
Emily Dickinson A Bird Came Down The Walk - Poem Lyrics - Emily Dickinson - A Bird Came Down
http://quotations.about.com/cs/poemlyrics/a/Bird_Came_Down.htm


Analysis:

This poem is talking about the real view or behavior of each person. This poem used a bird to describe a person and when the bird didn't notice that the speaker was present and watching him, this bird acted naturally by "biting an angle-worm in halves And ate the fellow, raw." Raw symbolize the "wildness" and it shows that when people feels that they are safe and away from the other people, they show their awkwardness through their usual behavior like eating disgustfully.

And drinking dew from a grass symbolizes the "refinement" because dew kind of symbolizes the purity and richness and the bird hopped sidewise to the wall to let a beetle pass which symbolize that the bird was being polite because the beetle was present.

So Emily Dickinson is trying to show us that human is trying to be appropriate in front of other people and she is accepting that it is a natural thing, beautiful. This poem seems kind of dark but the remarkable thing about this poem is that she used the beautiful language by using stanza in the last sentence.

Why I chose this poem:
Because I agree with her thought that human's behavior changes when the people is around. Nobody in the world can deny her thought because it is a true reality and natural thing that people become nesty and show their stupidity when nobody is around.